Julia Chang's Palm Explosion

Last Thursday Ken Malcolm and I got together at Ken's house to draw. After some rock paper scissors Ken had to choose the theme, which became Kung Fu. So, I started drawing and decided to experiment with a different angle. I started drawing this pic as a foreshortened pic in a different angle. I haven't had much (if any) experience with foreshortened pics but I thought this turned out quite well.

After drawing we also played Tekken 5 (Take a guess of which character I play >_> ). So in the end I decided that I'll make my drawing into one of Julia (But I already kinda got the pose from her anyway ).

This is her palm explosion move, thats quite strong and can dodge high attacks, but it's activation time is long, so its not too useful
Still, its pretty cool

Pantsu >_>

I took waaaaaay longer than the other 2, who both finish their pics on the same day >_>.
[EDIT] Whoops, only Malcs completed his on the day.

I need to make my guidelines lighter, you can still see a lot of them and some are so dark >_>.

Criticisms/Critiques welcome

(30% of the original 300dpi scan)